For my final draft, I added a black and white Twitter logo which I had some problems with, as compressing it down to such a small size gave it rough edges, due to the limitation of pixels it could be made up of, therefore I decided to use the logo with the letter 't' in it, rather than the bird that is typically used/for it. At the bottom,, I added "In Cinemas February 13th" to inform the audience of the date in which it will be released. I chose that specific font as it is rather thick, yet isn't too squished together, therefore appearing to be very clear on the poster. I chose a red font to match the title, and also stand out above the credits, as the release date is key information. Furthermore, using the effects toolbar on paint.net, I increased the radius and decreased the brightness on both the title and tagline, in order to give it a shadowy effect which blends in nicely with the background, complimenting the other colours in the poster. Overall I think that our main image is strong, featuring our main character holding her primary weapon that helps to show our film is of the horror genre. Our choice of fonts have also been conventional to the horror genre, connoting both blood and sharp objects, which feature prominently in our production.
Poster Update 3
I started to construct the credits for our poster, using the "SF Movie Poster" font, giving a realistic feel to the poster. I featured our production company's name, as well as mentioning everybody who acted in the film, (myself, Lucy and Faith). I then listed various parts of the production process along with who took on the main role within it. Below the credits, I added the link to a Facebook, Twitter and Production Company webpage, so that people who would view the poster can get interactive and follow all updates regarding our film. I also added the Facebook logo, and am currently working on getting a high-resolution black and white Twitter logo to add that will fit the colour scheme. This helps audiences to instantly recognise the social media platforms if they do not at first read the links. Adding a website for our production company creates a buzz around us, and would allow them to look into more projects we'd be working on. I chose the colour white for the credits as it stands out on the the black clothing, and is also readable on the lighter areas of her arms. I also altered the colour of the tagline from dark red to black, so that it doesn't clash with the title, as previously it could have been misinterpreted as being a part of the title. It also helps both itself and the title to stand out to audiences, more prominently the title, which is the only red aspect within the poster.
Poster Update 2
Following the simple draft I produced earlier, I've now made more changes. I decided to move the title to above our character's head instead of on her body, in order to be able to fit the credits on neatly. I also added a tagline above the title, saying "TRUST NOBODY". This links strongly to our production, as Delilah betrays the trust of her friends, and eventually kills them. It's also a direct mode of address, telling the audience not to trust anybody, and it aims to make them ask WHY they shouldn't trust anyone, therefore enticing them into seeing the film. I added two full-stops withing this tagline to put an emphasis on each individual word, therefore coming across with a more powerful effect. I used a font named "Men of Nihilist", as it is easy to read, and the letter 'N' has very sharp edges that could resemble a knife, further linking it to our production. I also added a gradient effect to the background of the poster. After reviewing how it looked with a plain white background, I came to the conclusion that it looked more like a dark-romance film poster rather than a horror. Having the black part of the background fade out at our character's shoulders looks well, as she is almost being consumed by darkness (something that happens to her in our production). However the white area of the background balances it out, representing her transition from good to evil, summarising her anti-hero status.
Poster Update 1
Following our photo-shoot the other day, I have begun to draft my poster using paint.net. I removed the background of the image by using the magic wand feature withing the software, however it removed some of the fine strands of hair on our character's head, so I found a slightly blurred effect to add onto it, therefore smoothing the edges and making it look less noticeable. I have also downloaded the font we are using for our title and chosen a rough colour that we plan to use. I'm currently playing around with the size of the main image, as well as the placement of our title, to make sure we leave room for our tagline, and any other bits of text we need.
Shooting Script
‘DELILAH’
Written By
Charlie Ball
GREEN CERTIFICATE
The
film’s rating is shown.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Eerie
wind sound.
Fade to:
Ident
The
‘Changan Pictures’ ident is shown.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Static
sound heard over the ident
Fade to:
IDENT
‘GREY
MOON PICTURES’
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Cinematic
intro sound and wolf howl
TITLE
‘This
Winter’.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Piercing
ambient horror music starts to play in the background
Cut to:
CLOSE-UP
A
house-sign saying ‘Westland House’ is shown.
Cut to:
ESTABLISHING SHOT
A
house is shown. The drive is empty, curtains are closed and there is nobody
around. It is a cloudy, rainy day.
DIEGETIC SOUND
Birds
start to crow and rain can be heard
Cut to:
ESTABLISHING SHOT
The
garden and drive of the house are shown, it is raining and there is no activity
on the road ahead.
Cut to:
EXTREME CLOSE-UP
Delilah’s
eye is shown blinking. She is young and appears to be in some sort of trance.
Her location is not clear.
Fade to:
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Cinematic
bass boom.
TITLE
“This
year’ most chilling film…”
Cut to:
CLOSE UP
A
record player is shown in action.
DIEGETIC SOUND
Clicking
of the vinyl player before playing ‘Maybe’ by the Ink Spots.
Cut to:
MID-SHOT
DELILAH
is shown rocking back and forth in front of the record player. She is alone and
has an anxious look on her face. She looks around whilst rocking.
MID-SHOT
DELILAH
is seen standing in a hall looking out of a window. She is wearing a mid-length
white dress with her hand placed upon the window. It’s sunny outside and the
light is reflecting clearly off of the bannister.
CLOSE-UP
A
short flashback is shown, with DELILAH rocking back and forth in a bedroom. She
looks very distressed and has her head in her hands.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Electrical
buzz.
MID-SHOT
DELILAH
is shown staring out of the window once again, but this time from outside, in
which she is seen looking directly into the camera. Her face is emotionless and
she is wearing pale white make-up and red lipstick.
CLOSE-UP
The
flashback from before is repeated.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Electrical
buzz.
CLOSE-UP
DELILAH
is shown opening a drawer with her right hand. It’s bright outside and the
kitchen is relatively tidy, and is still isolated.
CLOSE UP
The
flashback from before is repeated.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Electrical
buzz.
CLOSE-UP
The
drawer is full of cutlery, and DELILAH goes straight for a large, silver knife
in the right side of the drawer.
CLOSE-UP
DELILAH
stares intently at the knife, as if she’s contemplating what she will do with
it.
Cut to:
TITLE
“From
the creators of ‘Among Her…’
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
More
high-pitched ambient horror music starts to play in the background
CLOSE-UP
Some
taps are shown to be covered in blood, on what seems to be a bathtub.
Fade to:
MID-SHOT
DELILAH
is seen leaning forwards onto a sink, staring at herself in a mirror. She is
wearing a black dress. The curtains are closed and the room is dark.
Fade to:
CLOSE-UP
A
pair of legs are shown in a bathtub covered in blood. It is not clear whose
legs these are. There is a large amount of blood, which assumingly is a result
of a severe stab wound due to the focus on DELILAH’s knife previously.
Fade to:
CLOSE-UP
DELILAH
is seen smearing black make-up down her face. She stares into the mirror, her
mind doesn’t seem to be with it at this moment, as she further stares into the
mirror following this.
TITLE
“TRULY
TERRIFYING” – THE GUARDIAN”.
CLOSE-UP
An
iPhone can be seen, with an emphasis on the incoming call from DELILAH. A hand
is shown picking up the phone.
DIEGETIC SOUND
Phone
ringing.
Cut to:
TITLE
“You are not safe…”
MID CLOSE-UP
A
boy (LEON) is shown answering the phone, and after answering has a confused
look on his face. He is sat on a chair in a bedroom, wearing a navy hoodie and
navy jeans. He is around 17 years old.
LEON
What’s up?
Cut to:
EXTREME CLOSE-UP
The
door to Delilah’s house is shown to be opened slightly. The door is blue and
slightly damaged with an old-fashioned handle.
LONG SHOT
The
camera is behind some bushes, giving the impression that LEON is being watched.
He is seen approaching the house wearing the same outfit as he was earlier on.
He looks suspiciously at the door because it’s unexpectedly open. It is cold
and windy outside, there is no sun or rain.
HIGH ANGLE SHOT
LEON
enters the house, walking down the hallway. DELILAH appears from the room
behind him, she is wearing a white dress and is carrying the knife she
previously picked up from the drawer. She moves slowly in an attempt to make no
noise as LEON looks around into the living room.
Cut to:
MID-SHOT
LEON
is seen looking down the hallway after checking out the living room. DELILAH is
close to him now, glaring purposefully at the back of his head, and is raising
the knife as she gets closer.
180 DEGREE SHOT
Shown
from LEON’S perspective – he turns around and is met by DELILAH as she presses
the knife against his throat whilst staring straight into the camera.
DIEGETIC SOUND
Glass
breaking as DELILAH approaches LEON.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Piercing
sound increasing in volume to scare audience.
TITLE
“REVOLUTIONISING
THE HORROR GENRE” – EMPIRE.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
More
ambient horror sounds start to play in the background, at a steady, low pitch.
MID-SHOT
DELILAH
exits some bushes whilst holding a knife. She is wearing a white dress and
black boots. Her reasons for being in the bushes are unknown but the knife is
covered in blood.
Fade to:
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Banging
sounds are heard, increasing in frequency as the shots get faster.
CLOSE-UP
DELILAH
is seen walking, with her arms effortlessly swinging by her sides as she walks
across the sodden grass.
Fade to:
MID-SHOT
DELILAH
stands still in the middle what can now be seen as the garden to her house. She
freezes for around 4 seconds.
Fade to:
CLOSE-UP
DELILAH’s
hand is shown holding the knife, which subsequently falls in slow motion. Her
house is blurred in the background with the focus on the knife.
Fade to:
GROUND ANGLE-SHOT
DELILAH
is shown falling to her knees next to the knife. She drops effortlessly to the
ground, before grasping her head in her hands. The kitchen light in the
background is flickering atmospherically. The grass is wet but DELILAH is not
hesitant when falling to the ground.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
Echoing
sound heard increasing in volume before an electrical buzz cuts it off to
silence.
Cuts to black
screen
MID-SHOT
DELILAH
is standing with her back turned to the camera. She is wearing a white dress.
The screen is static-like.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
A
static sound is heard.
Flashes to:
EXTREME CLOSE-UP
DELILAH
stares intensely into the camera. Her head is twisting sideways slowly, with a
detached look in her eyes.
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
A
high pitched, piercing scream can be heard as DELILAH stares into the screen.
Cuts to:
TITLE
“Delilah
– 13.02.17”
NON-DIEGETIC SOUND
A
loud boom can be heard, with short static sounds combining with the glitching
titles at the end.
TITLE
“FOLLOW”
- with Facebook, Instagram, Youtube, Twitter and Snapchat logos.
Day 1 of Filming
Today we completed the majority of our filming with our main actress, Lucy. We also completed our photo shoot for the ancillaries, which will both feature Lucy as the main image to show the consistency between all the products. Despite the fact that we still have additional parts to film for the trailer itself, the work we did will mean that we can begin the editing process for both our main task and our ancillaries as we work towards the deadline. Overall, I think the day was a success, and we managed to get a lot more done than we thought we would in the amount of time we had. However, we did end up making a couple of changes to the shots we included, choosing not to include some shots in favour of new ones that were more realistic once we actually started filming, which I will discuss in another post. We ended up making some minor changes to the plot itself in order to make the most of the time we had with our main actress, and get the majority of our shots filmed. Currently we still have to film scenes such as the flashbacks, any shots with the polaroid photo in and any shots that involve our other actors we have chosen, and we plan to complete this as soon as possible.
Shooting Schedule
SUNDAY 22/01/17
10am - 1pm
Who : Charlie - Megan - Lucy
Location: Megan's Nan's house
Props: Knife & Fake Blood
Costumes :
Weather Forecast
I decided to look into the weather conditions for when we film our trailer this Sunday. As the diagram above shows, there is no rain forecast throughout the day, and it will be somewhat sunny. This is good for us as natural lighting will be available throughout the day, giving us more time to film, and not using as much time to artificially light the setting.
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